Monday, September 26, 2005

songs created

so this one was written in about 5 minutes...

anyone else ever felt/feel this way?



the hardest part

with each breath
i could speak words that reveal or condemn me
reveal or condemn me
so i wait
biding my time, holding my tongue
seeking patience

beautiful pain
gripping my heart
choking me in raw emotion
hesitation
has one hand on my neck
and the other one is over my mouth

look at me
speak the truth like you promised you would do
can you hear
my thoughts racing
can you see through my eyes what they might be

so uneasy
so unsettling
but i cannot get enough
so unnerving
so exciting
anticipating your touch

you say you feel this too
but do you, do you?
you're standing so close to me
will i move
or will you?


thoughts, anyone?

3 comments:

Jeff said...

interesting

i look forward to hearing the melody

Anonymous said...

I like the line
'hesitation
has one hand on my neck
and the other is over my mouth'

I think I've felt that way before.

...and I also look foward to hearing the melody.

Kate said...

do you think i could get a handwritten copy of those lyrics?

just if you get a chance...