untitled song

sleep didn't come as easily as i thought it would
as i thought it should
on this night
with darkness settling
despite the brightest light

all your hollow phrases haunt me
threatening, they taunt me
through the night

you paved my way with your intentions
i should have know where that leads
you proved yourself wrong
i refused to see you were lost all along

the ride is over, but i held on
the song is ended, but i kept singing along
the curtain fell, the audience is gone
i open my eyes and here i stand, alone


any critique?